DVD Burner wrote:

Zephryus wrote:Ouch. That resonated.

An acurate description of my day too on eplaya.

well, thank you. i guess i just recieved a writer's greatest compliment.

*blush*

Another day,
The sun sets.
What was once beautiful,
Has now grown dull with misuse.
Such wonderful times were met in each other's arms,
To be met with despair.
The laughter has turned to tears,
The love slowly transforms to hate.
And I feel left behind,
Alone,
Afraid,
And utterly spent.

So take the damn thread. I wasn't mine to begin with, but Tzimisce and her friends seem to have abandoned it. well, i wasn't initially planning to abandon the post... however... it has become more of a political discussion as opposed as a place to share thoughts and the like. :? however, if anyone ...

“Is this what you want?”, she asks him with a seductive tone. “Of course it is. Isn’t this what you want?”, he asks in reply. She simply laughs a low laugh as she feels his hands slowly underneath her skirt. His hands gently caress her silky white thighs. His hands slowly tremble as he explores the ...

“You know what’s going to happen if we do this, right? Do you even care?”, she asks him, her voice becoming more insistent. “I do not care.”, he says simply. She looks up at him with pleading eyes. “All that matters is that I love you.”, he says. His lips brush gently against hers before he kisses h...

A cold night, Your arms wrapped around me tight. I smile, You smile back. I see your love, So wonderfully divine. You whisper to me, Such beautiful words, That I only just begin to comprehend. I see in your eyes, Such a loving look. Feel your arms around me. Feel your hands entwined with mine. You s...

lonliness, it begins to overwhelm. time alone, apart, away. broken hearts, lost souls, waiting to come together, to dance and sing. to luxuriate in love's glow. to dance once again upon the moons pale glow, upon the sun's welcoming rays. ____________________________________________________ a love, a...

He takes a deep breath and continues, “I do see the validity to it, and God, just the flavour… It’s… it’s just amazing. But I fail to see how this is better then sex.” “Well love, it’s not supposed to be better… It’s supposed to enhance it.”, she says in a deep breathy voice. His eyes widen and he s...

Her hand slowly trails down the moist window, her fingers leaving trails amongst the grey. A passion filled scream escapes her mouth, as she looks him deep in the eye. He brow furrows as he comes closer to the time of ultimate passion, his lips fumble upon her cheek as he comes closer to her. Her ey...

your words flutter on silent wings, caressing my ear. your precious breath touches my soft skin. words formed, words of passion, words of love, words i shall remember everlasting. soft gentle caresses of my skin, a passing smile, a gentle kiss. a sigh says everything, more then words can express. su...

okies... since my other thread that wasn't meant to be so much discussion but just a common sharing of works of fellow artists got hijacked into a political discussion, i've decided to make this thread a little more streamlined. :) the spirit of this thread is for all writers, artists, etc. to share...

zephryus and dvd burner: thank you.

i don't mind political debate. i actually enjoy it. however, i've noticed that arguments have a tendency to flare up in a place of art.

i think that zephryus's analogy said it best.

fuck? can we ask for some?

Once upon a time, there was this girl. She was never very attractive. She was overweight, and poor; all of which never boded well for children, especially in a middle class society. She was constantly mocked for her clothes. She hit puberty at a very young age. The other children would laugh at her....

well, thank you very much.

now i feel all giddy... like a little school girl.

You stand before me, The many twinkling lights of the nighttime city reflect in your eyes. Your smile, It says the world to me. You mouth opens, No words come out. The sonata of the night flies in on swift wings, And wings us to the blue pacific. The waters pound the beach, To the beating of my hear...

DE FACTO wrote:
Now you know it includes you.

great to see you. I was afraid we had lost you in the temporary muddle.

nope, i've just been a busy little bee;)

oh, does that include me?

from these bitter ashes i rise, struggling with demons past, yearning for a glorious future. strong ties keep me fettered to the putrid waste, i search for the stregth to burst free. such strength comes slowly. i will fly free, unfettered, unbound. i will achieve the inner peace, the beauty that com...

I’m sorry, I’m sorry for the heartache, The drama The pain. I’m sorry that you feel drained. I never wanted to cause you any harm. But I want to thank you. Thank you for loving me, Thank you for caring. You have showed me the road. And I was too stubborn until now to take it. I only hope that it is ...

Every morning I wake up to the same thing… My head cautiously resting upon the kitchen burner. Sometimes I wish we had opted for a bigger place, rather then this tiny abomination of a tenement. But let me give you a better idea of where I’m living. Picture the apartment that Eric Draven was living i...

a thread that is truly not so much a discussion but an open forum for things someone wanted to share? I mean, sharing is great...especially when everyone does it. I certainly applaud equal opportunity sharing but I have no mind to start an e-riot. this is open to everyone. i just happen to post my ...

Tzimisce, I read your writings and found them to be very interesting, was the first example of your writing from a book you ar e creating? Do you write many poems also? You have the unique talent of writing, keep up the good work. I hope to read some more in the future. What type of writing do you ...

a brave new world, i venture into, where thoughts, words, actions no longer need be unsaid. a passionate kiss, no longer forbidden, love no longer hidden. words become action, emotions becomes words. i stand before the world, this wonderous new world. and his arms hold me close, and his lips kiss aw...

for me the perfect dream would be the one i'm starting to live right now. to have a wonderful boyfriend with a wonderful wife who have welcomed me into thier lives for both good and bad. and to have such a loving relationship. to have a place to live away from the drama i currently reside. to get a ...

i wish that for once my life would continue on the good track that it is on. no drama, no bullshit.

and to be happy with where i am, but always hope that more is possible.

One breath, One moment, One heartbeat in time. One thought One purpose, One evening alone. Those words you professed, A memory, Always persistent. Such beauty, Such love, Such passion. To hear your voice tremble, To see it in your eyes, To feel your arms around me, Such blissful heaven. Eyes locked ...

well, thank you for the compliment.

and you are quite welcone for the tease

"Dissent is the highest form of patriotism."

-Thomas Jefferson

blyslv wrote:I'm broke and I hate my job. Really broke. And I haven't yet figured out a way to figure out what I want to do!

well, count me in for a part of that gripe. i have figured out what i want to do with my life.

but i have a shitty job and am constantly broke.