not so much a discussion, but something i wanted to share...

All things outside of Burning Man.
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not so much a discussion, but something i wanted to share...

Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Oct 22, 2003 1:48 am

ok, so this may not inspire too much discussion. however, i thought i would share it, and not too certain where to put it. i like sharing my art... so, here it is.
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your words flutter on silent wings,
caressing my ear.
your precious breath touches my soft skin.
words formed,
words of passion,
words of love,
words i shall remember everlasting.

soft gentle caresses of my skin,
a passing smile,
a gentle kiss.
a sigh says everything,
more then words can express.

such beauty in this world,
i can not imagine,
should be left untended and to grow wild.
skillful hand and warming heart,
tender and gentle care,
these things breed strong growth.
and what i wish is growth,
to create something withstanding.
a production of love,
passion and compassion,
beauty and regalness.

time will tell whether this is to be truth.
time will tell whether love can survive.
time will tell if love is true.
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*waits to hear about how overly sappy this is*

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Post by DE FACTO » Wed Oct 22, 2003 5:43 am

Do share some more under this thread.
even though...........

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Post by griqkincaid » Wed Oct 22, 2003 2:00 pm

Great poem, more is desired. More I Say, Says I!!!
"Fortune Favors The Brave"
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Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Oct 22, 2003 4:25 pm

DE FACTO, don't worry this will not be like timeconfigur8. it'll all stay under one thread.

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Night of New Beginnings, pt. 1

Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Oct 22, 2003 4:29 pm

(i know at least 2 of you have read this one...)

Her hand slowly trails down the moist window, her fingers leaving trails amongst the grey. A passion filled scream escapes her mouth, as she looks him deep in the eye. He brow furrows as he comes closer to the time of ultimate passion, his lips fumble upon her cheek as he comes closer to her. Her eyes close as she feels his lips cold and passionate upon her throat. His eyes close as his teeth plunge deep into her throat.
“So easy… Oh so easy…”, are the only words he thinks as the bittersweet coppery taste fills his mouth.
A loud moan escapes her mouth as she’s enraptured by his kiss, his exquisitely painful fulfillment. Her hand reaches to grasp the sill with all the strength within her. Nails dig deep into painted wood. Her lips tremble as she begins to slowly, gently kiss his neck. Her tongue plans out a delicate trail along his throat until it finds the tender spot. He gasps as he feels her teeth enter his neck. He replaces his mouth to her neck as his eyes close to linger in the exquisite pain that she also feels.
They both embrace each other for what seems eternal. And just as quickly it’s over, as cheap and tawdry as any back seat charade. He rests his head upon her shoulder as he slowly, drunkenly opens his eyes. He licks his lip, taking in the little bit that remains upon them. She slowly sways her head back and forth in time to some unknown tune. He lifts his head up and smiles broadly at her as her hand caresses his chest tenderly. He stands up slowly and her hand slowly slides down his body, finally dropping in to her lap. She looks up at him, eyes wide.
“Well, what do you think?”, she asks him, with a slight coy tone.
“Me? I… I don’t know what to say.”, he says, his voice a little strained.
“You don’t have any idea what that felt like… for the first time…”, she continues, her voice sounding more seductive.
He simply looks at her, his eyes slightly glazed in the afterglow of such immense pleasure.
“It… I… I most definitely was not prepared for that.”, he says gratefully.
“Come now, do tell me what you’re impressions were…”, she asks.
He stares at nothing, looking totally blank.
“I don’t think that it ever occurred to me what it could feel like…”, he pauses before he continues, “I mean, it’s not really something you spend you’re nights or days thinking about. It’s just something that you kind of have to experience for yourself. I can’t really say that it’s more exhilarating then sex.”

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Post by Kinetic II » Wed Oct 22, 2003 10:03 pm

Some of us have experienced something very close to what you posted. And besides saying I loved the post, I'll leave it at that.

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Post by DE FACTO » Thu Oct 23, 2003 3:28 am

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even though...........

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Post by DE FACTO » Thu Oct 23, 2003 3:41 am

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even though...........

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Post by DE FACTO » Thu Oct 23, 2003 3:46 am

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even though...........

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Night of New Beginnings, pt. 2

Post by tzimisce1313 » Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:09 am

He takes a deep breath and continues, “I do see the validity to it, and God, just the flavour… It’s… it’s just amazing. But I fail to see how this is better then sex.”
“Well love, it’s not supposed to be better… It’s supposed to enhance it.”, she says in a deep breathy voice.
His eyes widen and he sucks his breath in at the thought.
“Uh… Um… Are you….”, he asks, a little nervous.
She sits there a bit and watches him squirm at the thought of sex. She breathes slowly as she tried to abstain from laughing. She runs her hand through her raven black hair, separating the burgundy streaks from the rest of her hair. Finally, after holding back for long enough, she busts forth with laughter. Not loud or mocking, but a gentle laughter that could soothe any soul. He gives her a nervous smile and sits back down across from him. He closes his eyes and hears the roaring music from downstairs filter through the floorboards. His head moves slightly to the gravely lyrics that are just barely heard.
“I see what you were concentrating on before.”, he says, slight innocent smile upon his face, “You… you truly are beautiful.”
His hand rests upon her shoulder and falls down to the top of the vinyl corset. He kneels before her like he’s preying to some ancient goddess. She closes her eyes and slightly turns her head. Her black skirts spread around her like wisps of a cloud. She looks down at her lap, he hands folded on it. He brings one hand to the side of her face. He gently caresses it and tilts it up to look at him.
She sees his face, gentle and tender. Her blue eyes look deep into his. She sees what his thoughts truly are. She closes her eyes as a tear mixed with black eye liner glides down her face.
“Why do you say that?”, she asks him.
“Because it’s precisely what I see.”, he replies, lips closing in for a passionate kiss.

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Post by joel the ornery » Fri Oct 24, 2003 3:13 am

Stiff Discipline After Schoolboys' Viagra Prank
Thu Oct 23,10:24 AM ET
LONDON (Reuters) - Six British schoolboys were rushed to hospital after taking the erection-enhancing drug Viagra at lunchtime for a dare, the school said on Thursday.

Forest School in Winnersh, southern England said paramedics were called after a fellow student told teachers about the 13-year-olds' prank.

"It is believed that a pupil brought the tablets in from home into the all-boys school and shared them with five friends," the local education authority said in a statement.

The Sun newspaper quoted a source at the school as saying: "By the time the afternoon lessons began, there was no hiding what they had done."

Paramedics took the six squirming boys to the nearby Royal Berkshire Hospital, where they were monitored until the effects wore off.

"The school has a strict no drugs policy and a pupil will be temporarily excluded for actions which placed other pupils at risk," the education authority added.

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Post by DE FACTO » Fri Oct 24, 2003 3:45 am

Just had to share it again. ( I love this pic.)

Bush drops dog.
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even though...........

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Mon Oct 27, 2003 10:35 am

lonliness,
it begins to overwhelm.
time alone,
apart,
away.
broken hearts,
lost souls,
waiting to come together,
to dance and sing.
to luxuriate in love's glow.
to dance once again upon the moons pale glow,
upon the sun's welcoming rays.
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a love,
a lifetime,
a moment,
a word,
a statement,
a sigh,
a kiss,
an act,
a wonderous feeling,
this feeling with you.
in the throes of passion,
i feel you near.
when you're as distant as the sun and moon,
i feel you near.
to hear your voice,
to look into your eyes,
to step into to that wonder once again,
such pleasures untold.
such wonders to yet explore,
our only bounds, time.
so,
let time throw caution to the wind.
let's explore all that there is.

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How to post a picture

Post by Matthew » Thu Oct 30, 2003 5:14 pm

I have a photo that I want to share. Can anyone tell me how to post it here?
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Post by III » Thu Oct 30, 2003 5:33 pm

you need to host the photo on another (your own?) website, and then link to it from here using:
<img src="http://your.image.url">
[url]http://3playa.cultureshark.net/[/url]

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Tue Nov 04, 2003 4:16 pm

A cold night,
Your arms wrapped around me tight.
I smile,
You smile back.
I see your love,
So wonderfully divine.
You whisper to me,
Such beautiful words,
That I only just begin to comprehend.
I see in your eyes,
Such a loving look.
Feel your arms around me.
Feel your hands entwined with mine.
You speak of love true.
You speak of moments to be.
I remember times long past.
And all roads seem to lead to the same place.
Some place beautiful,
Some place precious,
Something beyond all comprehension.
I look boldly into this happy,
Wondrous new world.
I walk bravely by your side.
I wrap my arms around your waist,
And whisper into your ear,
Words of love true.
And hear the same in return.
You are comfort to me.
And that is something I do not want to loose.
Beauty,
Comfort,
Love.

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Nov 05, 2003 12:33 am

Your words,
So beautiful,
Brings tears to my eyes.
Tears of happiness,
Tears of love.
It makes me smile just knowing,
Knowing that you love me.
It makes me smile,
Knowing that I love you.
Like the early rays of morning,
It warms me to look into your eyes.
Like the beautiful radiance of the moon,
It comforts me knowing that no matter how my emotions wane and wax,
You will still love me.
That through this hell,
You think that I am worth it.
You are worth it all to me.

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Night of New Beginnings, pt. 3

Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Nov 05, 2003 12:36 am

“You know what’s going to happen if we do this, right? Do you even care?”, she asks him, her voice becoming more insistent.
“I do not care.”, he says simply.
She looks up at him with pleading eyes.
“All that matters is that I love you.”, he says.
His lips brush gently against hers before he kisses her passionately.
Her lips curl into a devious smile. Her hand feels his heart racing within his chest.
She looks down at the floor. Composing herself, she brings her face up. Her hair frames her face like black pillars against alabaster. Her pale blue eyes look lucid, and stare deep into his. She maintains the look of innocence, of angelic beauty as she stares deeply into his eyes.
He places his hands around her back and starts to work at the laces of her corset, tied so tight that it would take an army to try to retrieve her from this piece of binding clothing. He feels the warmth of her breasts close to his chest. He feels the softness of her skin next to his. He gasps as her breasts encased in vinyl press against his chest.
His fingers find the crux of the knot. He slowly unwinds it with his fingers. He feels the corset loosen breath by breath. He runs his hand down the center of her back. He feels more of her soft skin being released from its vinyl and steel prison. His fingers work to help loosen the back of the corset.
She sits up, away from him. She smiles coyly at him as she pulls the corset off over her head letting her breasts fall gently upon her chest.
“Well, now we’re both half naked.”, she states with the same smile upon her face.
He simply nods as he pulls her closer to his body again. He feels the softness of her flesh against his. He sucks in a breath as he lets his hands gently caress her back. He feels her lips tenderly kiss his shoulders. He hears the driving beat of the music from downstairs. He closes his eyes. Trying to hide his mind from the imminent moment.
Her hand slowly falls down his chest to wind up in his lap. She lets it wander to the waist of his pants and undoes it as deftly as an assassin. She can feel the soft downy hair just below his navel.
His eye snap open once he realizes where her hand was. He bites his lip hard, drawing blood. Letting the blood slowly drip off his lip and onto his chin he pulls away from her and gives her a passionate kiss. His arms hold her close to his body and slowly lower her to the ground.

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Night of New Beginnings, pt.4

Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Nov 05, 2003 11:41 pm

“Is this what you want?”, she asks him with a seductive tone.
“Of course it is. Isn’t this what you want?”, he asks in reply.
She simply laughs a low laugh as she feels his hands slowly underneath her skirt. His hands gently caress her silky white thighs. His hands slowly tremble as he explores the unexplored realm. He likes his lips nervously. He gazes down at her like a weak predator, Uncertain of what to do with his prey. His hands move up and over the mound between her legs and feels the soft wiry hair. He gulps as he closes his eyes. He feels that he’s already at attention for her. He rolls his head back and brings his other hand underneath her skirt along the same trail on a different leg.
His fingers slowly open her up to him. Her eyes close and a low moan of pleasure escapes her lips.
“Is this what you want?”, he asks a second time, slight tremor to his voice.
“Mmmmmm… of course it is.”, she says a look of peaceful passion upon her face.
He finally opens his eyes and looks at her.
“I can do this, I can take her whole. No questions, no worries, just pure passionate sex. It’s my dreams.”, he thinks as he sees the smile upon her face.
She reaches up toward him, beckoning him closer. Her hands grab his and pull him down to her.
“Do you want to be inside of me? Feel me all around you?”, she asks in a deep tone.
He takes a deep breath and closes his eyes.
“I would do anything to do this to you. For you to let me do this to you.”, he says.
“Then enter.”, she says.
His eyes widen as he looks down at her. He closes his eyes as he takes the first step forward. A gasp escapes his mouth as he feels himself enclosed by her. She giggles as she watches his face contort.
“Dear God, such sensations…”, he thinks.
She licks her lips slowly then pierces her bottom lip with her teeth. She licks the blood away with her greedy tongue. Her eyes close as a good thrust brings her one step closer to pleasure.
He leans his head in to lick her neck all they way up to her lips. Her head tilts back as the throes of passion starts to take her. A deep moan escapes her lips as she feels him deeper within her.
“I haven’t felt this good in… I don’t know how long…”, she thinks as she closes her eyes..
He closes his eyes as he feels her, warm around him. He grunts as he tries to work harder, plunging in deeper.
She lets loose a deep moan; a moan that sounds like a million nights of longing and solitude. Her passions ignite as she feels him within her. She closes her eyes as her body begins to melt into his.
He throws his head back as he feels her body give to his steady rhythm. He grunts and groans, his own passions driving him further and further. His hands press deeply into her back. He digs his nails in, drawing blood.
She gasps as the pain shoots through her, igniting every nerve in her body. She screams loudly as she moves with his steady motion, in and out. She wraps her arms around him and scratches him with her claw-like nails. She feels his flesh easily give way and the blood well up at her fingertips.
She brings her arms around again and licks his blood off of her fingers, slowly, seductively. She relishes in the bitter iron and sweet taste of it. The last finger lingers in her mouth and she bites it hard. She slowly takes it out to see her blood welling up. She places it into his mouth. He takes the finger greedily. He sucks on it as if it were the finest wine, like water after spending an eternity in the desert. He feels it burn its way down his throat. It feels so alive, so much more then what he’s used to. He closes his eyes tightly.

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Post by Flux » Thu Nov 06, 2003 10:06 am

I'm not usually at a loss for words but, in this case, all I can say, in the immortal words of Neo, is

Whoa!

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Post by Dr. Pyro » Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:24 pm

Those people sure do bleed a lot. What are they, English in-breds or something?

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Post by Kinetic II » Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:36 pm

<snort!>

Some of us happen to like the blood aspect of the stories. It's not for everyone though.

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:37 am

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a little bit of a story

Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:40 am

“There is always more then one side to every story; this is no different. See there are these situations that you fall into. It’s never deliberate, but you do. Relationships stagnate. Relationships fall apart. And every now and then you can find that last brass ring, that last saving grace. Well, I think I have found it. But then again, things have proven disastrous when I have thought them not to be.

“Oh, I do forget myself, perhaps an introduction is needed. I am Sara. I have been a somewhat sturdy long-term relationship for a bit. But I found as of late, that it just isn’t working. We argue more and more and are civil far less then we need to be. So, I found myself being the Delilah. Lying and cheating. And then I fell in love with someone else. Don’t get me wrong, I still love Rick. But this new guy… well, it was unexpected. We’ve known each other for years. We’ve been acquaintances for years. Then we talk. And the talking is good. It’s great. We have a lot in common. And he tells me that he loves me.”

“I stop cold. I don’t know what to say. I ask him and he seems to come up with this excuse that he loves his friends and so on. But I start evaluating how I feel. I think about what I thought when we first met. I think about what happened when I heard his wife left him. And I realize that I have had concern for him for years. That I had this feeling of kinship for him since we first met 5 years ago.

“So, we talk. Feelings develop. And I fall in love, hard. We both do. And it is all confirmed in a kiss. One that wasn’t supposed to happen, but it did. And it was like fire and passion. And I decide shortly after to try this thing called polyamory.”

“But here are the catches. He’s married and in an open marriage. My fiancé would have killed me if I had done what my heart had told me to. I was torn. But I went through with it. I became polyamorous. And pursued a relationship with this man.”

“Then the unthinkable happens. He starts becoming close to another woman. That didn’t bother me. But he didn’t tell me that he was developing feelings despite me saying I don’t mind, just let me know. And it’s a hard situation. He’s dishonest. I’m hurt.”

“But here’s the real kicker. He leaves me for her. I’m the primary, but I guess because I find my happiness with more then one person and he couldn’t cope. He couldn’t deal with being in love with more then one person. And all I wanted to do is be happy, and love.”

“Do I ask for sympathy? No. Do I ask for understanding? Absolutely. And I expect you to think that I’m a freak. That taking on a love style was my justification for all that happened. It’s not easy. It’s quite a task. But that’s my story for better or for worse.”

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Post by DE FACTO » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:53 am

you know ......you really are something.

<sigh> :wink:

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Post by DE FACTO » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:54 am

in addition to the story I really like the pic.

you have excellent taste.

well maybe the same will happen later with your relationships. or do you really need one?

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Post by Kinetic II » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:59 am

The pic is most cool....

I have a few kinda similar ones...
http://chandra.harvard.edu/photo/2003/n ... 8_comp.jpg

Excuse the full link but I wanted to make sure everyone noticed the source. Hubble isn't the only observatory flying up there....Chandra rocks.

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Nov 26, 2003 1:22 am

DE FACTO wrote:you know ......you really are something.

<sigh> :wink:
heh, well, i'm glad you like the writings
DE FACTO wrote:in addition to the story I really like the pic.

you have excellent taste.

well maybe the same will happen later with your relationships. or do you really need one?
well, i could always use a second relationship.... which is by no means saying that it's for a secondary. but you'd have to be able to cope with a poly girl :wink:
Kinetic II wrote:The pic is most cool....

I have a few kinda similar ones...
http://chandra.harvard.edu/photo/2003/n ... 8_comp.jpg

Excuse the full link but I wanted to make sure everyone noticed the source. Hubble isn't the only observatory flying up there....Chandra rocks.
i'll have to check that out. i love all sorts of astronomy photography. have you seen the pictures of the solar maximum?

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Post by Kinetic II » Wed Nov 26, 2003 1:32 am

Yes I have, I pay attention to space weather as it can wreak havoc on some of the stuff I do in my primary job. There are some beautiful pics of the sun, and the Hubble stuff is excellent. But Chandra fascinates me the most of all.

That's why I posted the full link...I wanted to make it easier for everyone to take a look and find out more about Chandra and the observatories in general.

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Post by Patience » Wed Nov 26, 2003 9:37 am

Canto

It is 2:20 a.m. in San Francisco. Dear Carrie, hello.
It’s 5:20 in New York but here
time yet remains for sorcery—
it is the day of headless horsemen,
the year of parrot fever! I have given up
sleep, rely on light for energy,
a solar sponge-man in steel-toed boots.

Oft have I thee conjured in this dark place,
in self-same deluded static time
of non-sleep, drinking endless narcissistic coffees
for the secret powwow—
Let us begin! I shall have
a cactus for a heart, I will feed
the vultures, and you
will shuffle through the dimensional pudding,
kaleidoscopes your two eyes,
and remember all.

My stomach is empty, rumbling
like surf sloshing in a lonely cave.
My mouth is full of dead flowers. You,
like everything, are true, in a way.
I will add more letters to l o v e,
I will tar and feather
the greasy goose. Go back to sleep.

My blood has grown a skin, will not shed
till summer looms. In a city without season
I am an autumn leaf, the branches almost bare.
It is 3:30 a.m. Dear Carrie, hello.
It's not that I hate you. It's just that I'm a much better person than you.

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