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Post by Raheer » Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:00 am

tzimisce1313 wrote:
DE FACTO wrote:you know ......you really are something.

<sigh> :wink:
heh, well, i'm glad you like the writings
DE FACTO wrote:in addition to the story I really like the pic.

you have excellent taste.

well maybe the same will happen later with your relationships. or do you really need one?
well, i could always use a second relationship.... which is by no means saying that it's for a secondary. but you'd have to be able to cope with a poly girl :wink:
Your works are some of the best erotica, some of the best poetry, and easily the best dark erotic I've ever read! You really need to persue your gift professionally. You are incredible.

Raheer

ps: if you're serious about starting a second relationship, well, I think I could handle that, if you could deal with a poly guy! (I'm involved in a relationship already, myself!)
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Post by DE FACTO » Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:17 am

tzimisce1313 wrote:
DE FACTO wrote:you know ......you really are something.

<sigh> :wink:
heh, well, i'm glad you like the writings
DE FACTO wrote:in addition to the story I really like the pic.

you have excellent taste.

well maybe the same will happen later with your relationships. or do you really need one?
well, i could always use a second relationship.... which is by no means saying that it's for a secondary. but you'd have to be able to cope with a poly girl :wink:
Geeeezzzz, I have no idea how i missed this. But I did. hope you dont think I ignored you.

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 3:12 am

Raheer wrote:
tzimisce1313 wrote:
DE FACTO wrote:you know ......you really are something.

<sigh> :wink:
heh, well, i'm glad you like the writings
DE FACTO wrote:in addition to the story I really like the pic.

you have excellent taste.

well maybe the same will happen later with your relationships. or do you really need one?
well, i could always use a second relationship.... which is by no means saying that it's for a secondary. but you'd have to be able to cope with a poly girl :wink:
Your works are some of the best erotica, some of the best poetry, and easily the best dark erotic I've ever read! You really need to persue your gift professionally. You are incredible.

Raheer

ps: if you're serious about starting a second relationship, well, I think I could handle that, if you could deal with a poly guy! (I'm involved in a relationship already, myself!)
actually, i am thinking about working on my first novel... which the last piece that i posted is from. so, with any luck, i will be published.

as for a reltionship... hmmmmm... that could be totally feasible :wink: but i'd have to meet you first.

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 3:27 am

DE FACTO wrote:
tzimisce1313 wrote:
DE FACTO wrote:you know ......you really are something.

<sigh> :wink:
heh, well, i'm glad you like the writings
DE FACTO wrote:in addition to the story I really like the pic.

you have excellent taste.

well maybe the same will happen later with your relationships. or do you really need one?
well, i could always use a second relationship.... which is by no means saying that it's for a secondary. but you'd have to be able to cope with a poly girl :wink:
Geeeezzzz, I have no idea how i missed this. But I did. hope you dont think I ignored you.
nope, not at all... it's been thanksgiving. i can understand any delay. it's all good.

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another random poem

Post by tzimisce1313 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 3:39 am

this is more of a milestone poem for me. i just went through a really hard time personally. and the rainy days inspired me. so, i felt like kind of writing something to mark that milestone... it's a bit personal, but i hope you all enjoy.
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Hard rain,
Washes away the regrets and fears.
Leaving souls anew.
Purity,
Clean,
Water washes away all problems.
Leaving behind the clean slate,
To mark as we see fit in our lives.

Simple words,
Great meaning.
Each mark helps chronicle our lives,
And once they seemed sullied,
They are washed clean again.

Rushing waves,
Precious tide,
Come wash away the pain and fear,
The regrets of a life half lived.
Help me re-establish all that is myself,
The joy,
The love,
The freedom to ebb and flow,
As water is want to do.

Let me flow on the tide,
Feel the liquid embrace,
And wash me to my lover’s arms.

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Post by griqkincaid » Tue Dec 02, 2003 3:40 am

Tzimisce, you are a wonderful, incredible writer. Keep your writing coming and the Novel should be awesome :)
"Fortune Favors The Brave"
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Post by Raheer » Tue Dec 02, 2003 11:53 pm

Indeed, I think I speak for most, if not all, of us when I say that I can't wait to read your novel!

Raheer
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Post by Kinetic II » Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:03 am

Tzimisce, I wish I had your gift...your writing ability deserves to be noticed. The stuff you've posted has been very good.

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Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:25 am

wow. you guys certainly know how to make a lady blush.

thank you very much. well, i certainly hope that it will be very pleasing to all.

i enjoy sharing my writing. i figure if it inspires, or makes just one person feel just a little better, then it's all good. iif i can touch someone, then that's what i would truly like. :)

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Post by griqkincaid » Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:34 am

I'm holding back on the juvenile comment about touching someone. ;) All kidding aside, your writing ha touched people. People like me :)
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Post by DE FACTO » Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:54 am

I'll be happy to be the juvenile one. Only because I told her that a long time ago, (about her writing of course) and her looks do match her writing.
If I had only one ounce of her writing talent I would'nt be the most hated sock on this board.

:lol: :cry:



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Post by joel the ornery » Wed Dec 03, 2003 3:08 am

"think more, type less"

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Post by DE FACTO » Wed Dec 03, 2003 3:15 am

joel the ornery wrote:"think more, type less"
Bad advise. The last thing I think anybody here wants me to do is think.

That's what's got me into trouble. :roll:

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Post by Raheer » Wed Dec 03, 2003 3:21 am

DE FACTO wrote:I'll be happy to be the juvenile one. Only because I told her that a long time ago, (about her writing of course) and her looks do match her writing.
If I had only one ounce of her writing talent I would'nt be the most hated sock on this board.

:lol: :cry:



:wink:
You're not the most hated sock on the board! WillSmallPenisRoger is. (Unless, of course, you ARE WillSmallPenisRoger...).

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Post by DE FACTO » Wed Dec 03, 2003 3:29 am

Raheer wrote: You're not the most hated sock on the board! WillSmallPenisRoger is. (Unless, of course, you ARE WillSmallPenisRoger...).

Raheer
Wow thanks. and no I'm not WillSmallPenisRoger or configure 8 or etc...
it is well documented who me is.

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Post by joel the ornery » Wed Dec 03, 2003 3:42 pm

joel the ornery wrote:"think more, type less"
Not directed at anyone specifically, simply words to live by.

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Something a bit interesting

Post by tzimisce1313 » Sun Dec 07, 2003 10:39 pm

She smiles and runs her finger softly over his nipples. Her serpentine eyes looking down upon his finely chiseled body.

"You think I broke him?", she asks with an evil grin breaking upon her face as she looks upon her latest ghoul.

He answers her, "I do not think so mistress. If you watch carefully his chest still rises and falls."

She hisses and turns towards the fresco of father Set. She places one hand upon the painting and another on her silky, pale hip. Her long hair falling from over her shoulders. She bows her head in silent prayer.

She turns and looks back at him. She giggles a little.

"Good. I'll let him sleep it off. Well, if I learned something in L.A. it was how to fuck them good.", she says with a seductive smile.

She glides towards him. Her bare feet lightly padding against the floor. She moves every bit like the snake she is. She wraps one arm around his waist. Her other hand reaches up and rests gently against his cheek.

"Now tell me, when is the last time I fucked you that good?", she says as she gently bites her lip.

His eyes are fixed on hers. He can't do anything but gaze at them.

"Perhaps I should give you that pleasure again.", she says in a seductive tone.

She grabs his hand and drags him out of the room to another cermonial room.

She hits a secret switch and the granite door slides open to what looks like an elegant wedding chamber. She leads him to the gold gilded bed. He sits down gently upon it.

"So, tell me, what do you think of home?", she asks sitting down next to him.

She lets her hands wander over his naked chest.

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Post by DVD Burner » Fri Dec 19, 2003 6:02 am

Fantastic writing tzimisce1313. Thanks for the tease.
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Post by tzimisce1313 » Mon Dec 22, 2003 2:35 am

well, thank you for the compliment.

and you are quite welcone for the tease :wink:

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compliments well deserved!

Post by DE FACTO » Mon Dec 22, 2003 3:24 am

DVD Burner wrote:Fantastic writing tzimisce1313. Thanks for the tease.
tzimisce1313 wrote:well, thank you for the compliment.

and you are quite welcone for the tease :wink:

As always.

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Poem Inspired by "Omni Mundis Creatura" by Helium

Post by tzimisce1313 » Mon Dec 22, 2003 6:53 pm

One breath,
One moment,
One heartbeat in time.
One thought
One purpose,
One evening alone.
Those words you professed,
A memory,
Always persistent.
Such beauty,
Such love,
Such passion.
To hear your voice tremble,
To see it in your eyes,
To feel your arms around me,
Such blissful heaven.
Eyes locked to each other,
A moan,
A gasp,
A whispered sentiment.
Bodies entwined,
Muscles tensed,
Passion breached.
Such beautiful music,
Such wonderful sentiment,
And to wake in your arms once again,
Such a wonderful reward.

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a brave new world

Post by tzimisce1313 » Wed Dec 31, 2003 12:28 am

a brave new world,
i venture into,
where thoughts,
words,
actions no longer need be unsaid.
a passionate kiss,
no longer forbidden,
love no longer hidden.
words become action,
emotions becomes words.
i stand before the world,
this wonderous new world.

and his arms hold me close,
and his lips kiss away my fears,
his words comfort me,
in this strange new world.
his eyes hold me with highest regard,
keeps me before him,
before this strange new world.
and together we stand,
fearful,
loving, passionate,
before this strange new world

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Post by nipples » Wed Dec 31, 2003 12:44 am

depth this passion flow
how it is might i describe
loves enchanted bliss

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Pretext to the State of the Union Speech

Post by joel the ornery » Thu Jan 01, 2004 6:18 am

January 1, 2004
What We Will Do in 2004
By COLIN L. POWELL

WASHINGTON — As we Americans turn the last page of our calendars, many of us are moved to review the achievements of the year gone by and to make resolutions for the year ahead. This can be a frustrating business if one dwells on subjects like exercise and dieting, but the twin task of stock-taking and resolution-making is a worthy discipline — and not just for individuals.

We in the Bush administration have also taken stock and made resolutions. We do so with confidence because President Bush's vision is clear and right: America's formidable power must continue to be deployed on behalf of principles that are simultaneously American, but that are also beyond and greater than ourselves.

We resolve, of course, to expand freedom, and we are focused in particular on Afghanistan and Iraq. The Afghan people now have a constitution, a rapidly advancing market economy, and new hope as they look toward national elections. The aspirations of a free and talented Iraqi nation are also taking wing, now that Saddam Hussein's murderous and dangerous regime is no more. We are working to return sovereignty to the Iraqi people through a fair and open process and to ensure that the country receives the maximum feasible debt relief. As the Coalition Provisional Authority closes its doors on June 30, in accord with the Nov. 15 transition plan, we will open an embassy in Baghdad.

While our efforts in Afghanistan and Iraq will continue in 2004, we are resolved as well to turn the president's goal of a free and democratic Middle East into a reality. We will expand the Middle East Partnership Initiative to encourage political, economic and educational reform throughout the region. We will also stand by the Iranian people, and others living under oppressive regimes, as they strive for freedom.

This struggle will not be confined to the Middle East. We are working for the advent of a free Cuba, and toward democratic reform in other countries whose people are denied liberty. And we are resolved to support the young democracies that have risen in Latin America, Europe, Asia and Africa. The consolidation of freedom in many new but often fragile democracies will shape the aspirations of people everywhere, assuring that the 21st century will be a century of liberty worldwide.

Our efforts will apply to individuals as well as nations. In 2003 we freed thousands from oppression through President Bush's program to combat human trafficking — whether for prostitution or forced labor or to turn children into soldiers. We have saved lives and redeemed the enslaved, and we will do more in 2004. Also in 2004, the president's plan for H.I.V. and AIDS relief will help free millions worldwide from the devastation of this horrible disease.

We resolve to promote prosperity, too. A new international consensus is helping poorer countries develop themselves through good governance, sound economic, trade and environmental policies and wise investments in their people. The centerpiece of our program for development, to be started in 2004, is the Millennium Challenge Account — an incentive system that makes assistance contingent on political and economic reform.

We also made important strides in 2003 toward a more open international trade and investment climate, signing free trade pacts with Chile, Singapore and the countries of Central America. In 2004 the president will lead the effort to reinvigorate our global free trade strategy, and to advance regional and bilateral free trade as opportunities arise. His proposal to develop a Middle East free trade agreement is high on the agenda.

We are resolved, as well, for peace. Freedom cannot flourish and prosperity cannot advance without security, and this we are determined to achieve. Americans are safer as 2004 begins than they were a year ago. Afghanistan is no longer a devil's playground for terrorists, nor is Iraq an incubator for weapons of mass murder that could have fallen into terrorists' hands.

Al Qaeda remains a great danger — the main reason for our current heightened security posture. But its members are increasingly on the run, in hiding, in jail or dead. Its finances and communications are being disrupted, and closer intelligence and law enforcement cooperation among peace-loving countries is making headway against terrorist plots.

Iran has felt our sustained pressure and that of our allies to come clean on its nuclear weapons program, and has begun to do so. And Libya has renounced terrorism and weapons of mass destruction thanks to the president's robust counterproliferation strategy and bold British and American diplomacy. In our own hemisphere, narco-traffickers and terrorists are on the defensive thanks to strong United States support for a resolute Colombian government.

The war on terrorism remains our first priority, but success in that war depends on constructive ties among the world's major powers. These we pursue without respite; America's relations with Russia, China and India all improved in 2003. Ties with allies old and new have been strengthened as well, despite the growing pains of adjustment to a new era. Indeed, both NATO and the European Union will expand this year, which is good news for international security.

Our partnerships remain strong as do the institutions of international cooperation. We will rely on both to advance freedom, prosperity and peace in 2004. As we work to restore a liberated Iraq to its people, we invite the United Nations and the international community to help Iraqis establish a new citadel of free minds and free markets in the Middle East. With our NATO allies we will support the Afghan people as they heal their wounds and chart their future.

With China, Japan, Russia and South Korea we will continue to tackle the problem of North Korea's dangerous nuclear weapons programs. We seek peace and reconciliation in the Korean peninsula, but we will not reward threats from Pyongyang or provide incentive for blackmail. With our quartet partners — the United Nations, the European Union and Russia — we will help Israelis and Palestinians achieve peace, so that a free Palestine will exist alongside a secure and democratic Jewish state in Israel.

We are resolved, too, to share the burden to bring longstanding conflicts in Sudan, Liberia, Northern Ireland and elsewhere to an end. Such achievements will build momentum for the success of American diplomacy worldwide.

Freedom, prosperity and peace are not separate principles, or separable policy goals. Each reinforces the other, so serving any one requires an integrated policy that serves all three. The challenges are many, for the world is full of trouble. But it is also full of opportunities, and we are resolved to seize every one of them. If some of us drop a few pounds in the process, that's O.K., too.

Colin L. Powell is secretary of state.

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Onward into the bitch...

Post by Last Real Burner » Thu Jan 01, 2004 4:31 pm

"I keep my meat in my hands, cause you never know."
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Post by Lilly Flower » Sat Jan 03, 2004 12:48 pm

Lord have mercy. A perfectly great thread going south with some Colin Powell B.S.

Cant the politics stay on the political threads?
You are watching too much TV.

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Post by Tancorix » Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:48 pm

I've heard of thread drift but that was definitely the wrong thing for this thread.

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Post by joel the ornery » Sun Jan 04, 2004 6:05 am

Lilly Flower wrote:Lord have mercy. A perfectly great thread going south with some Colin Powell B.S.

Cant the politics stay on the political threads?
One man's B.S. is another man's fertilizer.

Furthermore, what if I believe all threads are political?
Tancorix wrote:I've heard of thread drift but that was definitely the wrong thing for this thread.
Thread drift? Wrong by what standard?

The name of the thread is... "not so much a discussion, but something i wanted to share...." therefore, I chose to "share" Colin Powell's letter as printed in the New York Times. I actually considered my posting it as a public service to all e-playans because not everyone can access the New York Times on-line due to the Time's requirement for registration.

I haven't libeled or slandered anyone with my post, so I believe I am within my rights as an e-playan, Black Rock City denizen and U.S.A. citizen.

And if you look back on my postings on this thread... it seems I have been quite polite... and I really don't have to expain myself to anyone.

Have a nice day.

Ornery as usual,

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Post by Tancorix » Sun Jan 04, 2004 8:52 am

Joel, your right, the title does cover your post. Sheesh. What got the response is this thread started out as tzimisce1313's awesome stories and it pretty much stayed on topic until you dropped your Colin Powell post. Now I have nothing against Colin Powell, I happen to like the man but you just distorted the way this thread was going with that post and that's why you got a backlash. That's all there is to it, it's not a personal attack, it's not an anti-republican vibe happening, it's just that the existing thread was pretty cool and some of us hope it continues. The writing is very damn good. And it beats some of the usual fare I read on here.

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I wish....

Post by Last Real Burner » Sun Jan 04, 2004 10:25 am

Love was undying,
life was unknowing,
death was uncertain,
friends were everlasting.


"My heart is the eyes I see with."
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