Haiku

Monkeypoo · Post by **Monkeypoo** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:41 am

Sensei wrote:first line works for me
and the second one does too
"I will" should be "I'll"

still and on the whole
not a bad first try really
for monkeypoet

How's this then?

Sensei says do it!
And you better do it right!
I'll spank your ass hard!

Monkeypoo · Post by **Monkeypoo** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:44 am

Baby is awake
Watching Sesame Street now
At two forty four

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:52 am

nice recovery
but the law is the law and
you're still getting spanked

not for that last line
haikus should never ever
ever use smileys

now go forth monkey
and haiku yourself silly
show us how it's done

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:54 am

Monkeypoo wrote:Baby is awake
Watching Sesame Street now
At two forty four

that's freakin' brilliant
I'm so proud of my monkey
I could just spank her

Oldguy · Post by **Oldguy** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 6:54 pm

Fuck-ing A-pril snows
up-on the east coast build-ings
wash-es a-way crap.

Why wait for sum-mer?
The snows cov-er the roof-tops.
Mi-am-i ho-tels!

My mind for-got words.
Build-ings, roof-tops, my mind skips.
I need Burn-ing Man.

Napalm Demon · Post by **Napalm Demon** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:12 pm

i wrote a haiku
but it wasn't very good
so i won't share it

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:56 pm

to write as well as
Oldguy and Napalm Demon
is a wish of mine

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 2:56 am

tequila straight please
wait isn't that wild turkey
i'll have both thank you

Simon of the Playa · Post by **Simon of the Playa** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:20 am

Fucking up Haiku
Hey! It's not really your fault
when you have six toes.

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:51 am

In the Confessions thread (Jan. 30th) Sensei wrote:I seriously considered making a doctors appointment, then I thought fuck it, I'll just start drinking a lot more.

booze wasn't helping
i broke down and saw a doc
he slapped me silly

in two weeks or so
chemo and radiation
then comes surgery

keep your pants on please
nothings changed I can still kick
all your dusty butts

we'll laugh over this
while we wait for the sunset
in black rock city

Monkeypoo · Post by **Monkeypoo** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 12:31 pm

Sensei, friend... *BIG HUGE HUG*

I send you good vibes
You're a friend I dearly love
All will be well, love

xoxoxoxoxoxox

Simon of the Playa · Post by **Simon of the Playa** » Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:05 am

feel better sensei
i too, the stubborn patient
goats growing older.

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Tue Apr 14, 2009 2:19 am

thanks so much Simon
i've just found the world is full
of mutants like us

Sensei · Post by **Sensei** » Tue Apr 14, 2009 4:49 am

let's change the subject
this thread here is for haikus
now get back to it

got my Zule ticket
already ate my fireball
counting the minutes

Simon of the Playa · Post by **Simon of the Playa** » Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:51 am

burn your old ideas
experience the unknown
life's lessons unlearned.

DVD Burner · Post by **DVD Burner** » Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:32 pm

[url=http://mashable.com/2010/02/04/sun-ceo- ... signation/]â€œTodayâ€™s my last day at Sun. Iâ€™ll miss it. Seems only fitting to end on a #haiku. Financial crisis/Stalled too many customers/CEO no moreâ€

Blompson · Post by **Blompson** » Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:54 am

no one is online.
no one to speak of, at least.
someone say something.

..wait, i just did that..
i guess i'm in the spotlight.
are you entertained?

Blompson · Post by **Blompson** » Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:57 am

my stuff is too clean.
i've misplaced my playa dust.
make it august now.

Elorrum · Post by **Elorrum** » Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:10 am

one little pebble
black, in the bottom of box
I want to go back

H.G.Crosby · Post by **H.G.Crosby** » Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:51 pm

time travel coming
or has it already been?
great D.M.T. , dude...

ygmir · Post by **ygmir** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:12 pm

I feel good
and I feel very healthy
a black pill?

lonestoner916 · Post by **lonestoner916** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:26 pm

Worker bees can leave.
Even drones can fly away.
The Queen is their slave.
-C.P.

EvilDustBooger · Post by **EvilDustBooger** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:54 pm

First we blow it up
Second burn it down to ash
blow burn ash repeat